Monday, August 2, 2021

My holiday writing.

Today I was learning how to use a hook sentence / paragraphs' dialogues' and to describe what we saw and how we felt.

I enjoy writing it down on Google Docs

I found it challenging to make my story interesting and make it more exciting.

My digital learning object shows what are done in the holidays.

Next time I would change my writing and my interesting words.

 

1 comment:


  1. Kia ora Destiny.
    My name is Finn and I am in Room 4 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.

    I really liked how much describing words you used.
    I learned that you used 6 paragraphs..
    Maybe you could use a hook sentence.

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